Poetry Friday Book Talk: Twas the Night Before Christmas – The Career Editions

1912 Cover on WikiI have very vivid memories of sitting in the kitchen while my Mom was cooking dinner, reading a Golden Books version of  “A Visit from St. Nicholas,” more commonly referred to as ‘Twas the Night Before Christmas. The verse is credited to Clement Clarke Moore, although there is evidence to suggest that Henry Livingston, Jr. is the author.

There have been lots of authors who use the original rhyme scheme to tell a similar story … but with different characters or set in different locations.

Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery
Charles Caleb Colton

Maybe it is because authors are trying to capitalize on the familiar tale and the ready-made rhyming structure that we see so many different versions of Moore’s quintessential poem. It also sets the bar on a reader’s expectations. Speaking for myself, I don’t want a thinly veiled rewrite. I am looking for a story that resembles the original but that stands on its own merit. I also want to read the rhymes with the same comfort of Moore’s poem. If there are hiccups or the words are forced, it won’t work.

Some of the versions don’t stay within the Christmas season … but since we ARE getting ready for Christmas, I am going to offer mini-reviews of some of the holiday renditions.

police story for night before christmasCop’s Night Before Christmas
by Officer Michael D. Harrison
illustrated by David Miles
Pelican Publishing, 2010

Summary: It is Christmas Eve, and instead of being home with his family, a police officer is on duty. There are a few calls, but nomany, so he goes to a diner to get something to eat. While there, Sergeant Kringle shows up and tells the officer to go home.  As he drives his helicopter out of sight, Kringle warns all bad guys to beware. The reading level is 2.7, and with thee rhyme it is accessible to young readers.

Book Talk: Like the original story, this one is told in first person. Most of us don’t think about people still working while we’re enjoying the holidays with our families, and this is a nice reminder.  I thought Kringle Cop took away from the story, though. Children of police officers and kids who love or are learning about community helpers will enjoy this book.  The rhyme wasn’t perfect, but it worked.

Night Before Christmas story for lawyersLawyer’s Week Before Christmas
by Jeff Justice
Illustrated by Salima Alikhan
Pelican Publishing, 2010

Summary: Anxious to start filling their coffers for the new year, the attorneys who comprise the practice of Bluff, Bluster, and Blunder know they have struck it rich with the plight of one Polly Brown, who slipped and fell on a toy while shopping at the mall.

Book Talk: The “juvenile” on the back cover does not mean young readers. This is an over-the-top parody of practicing law. The only thing stirring are the lawyers, not a mouse, no Santa, no Christmas cheer. The poem is filled with terminology common in the legal profession. In addition, some of the references are not suitable for your typical picture book audience.  This would be a fun gift for law students and lawyers.

night before christmas take-offA Pirate’s Night Before Christmas
written by Phillip Yates
illustrated by Sebastia Serra
Sterling Publishers, 2008

Summary: Do pirates get Christmas treasure? Yes. So who delivers it? No, it’s not Santa. Ahoy, it is Sir Peggedy and his eight trusty seahorses.

Book Talk: This sea-worthy rendition is probably the most clever re-modeling of the classic that I’ve ever seen. The descriptions of the pirates and events are vivid and brought to life in wonderful colorful. There is pirate jargon galore and the glossary in the back is a riot. So not only is it fun, you learn something, too. I also like that it has a 1.9 reading level (Flesch-Kincaid), which makes it accessible to young readers.

Do you have a favorite riff on the original?

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4 responses to “Poetry Friday Book Talk: Twas the Night Before Christmas – The Career Editions

  1. Great post — I’m surprised there are so many versions/retelling of the poem. I’ve been trying to find — no luck yet — a picture book put out by the poet’s granddaughter. It tells the family story behind the creation of “The Night Before Christmas.” I’ll let you know when I find it.

    1. Oh, I would love to read that book! There are two other versions that we’ve read this year!! They just didn’t fit the ‘career’ idea. I’m listening to my very excited 9-year-old read Dinosaur’s Night Before Christmas to her Dad as I type.

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  3. My favorites (especially to read aloud) are the Cajun Night Before Christmas and the Texas Night Before Christmas by James Rice.

    My dad read The Night Before Christmas aloud to us every year before we went to bed on Christmas Eve, so when I read it to myself, I still hear his voice…(thanks, dad!)
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